The analysis of "The butterflies" was quite good. The writer showed that he/she understood the meaning behind this story. He/she also said what she had learned from it by saying that she will be thinking more about how something that you find beautiful, can cause a lot of problems for others. Evidence from the text was also used from the text. <<"They are poor, they grow their own food and have little or no education, which you can tell by how proud they are that their granddaughter is attending school: “And clever,” the grandfather said [about his granddaughter]. “Writes every day in her book.”>> The writer also managed to combine the introduction and the conclusion in an elegant way that felt completely natural.
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